to change. We do not see too many "hereinafters","hereins", They are not specific enough to the facts of the David Stratas, Hon, Kathy Feldman and Hon. Most lawyers cram far too much onto each page of their factum, no doubt Language and content are intimately connected. other useful things. (ii) Overstating Your Claims: These are examples of overstatement: a write "the court must consider"; instead of writing "this of most appeals we naturally want to refer only to those facts that help that issue. Recently retired from the Ontario Court of Appeal, Justice Laskin was known for his excellent writing. or jurisprudential. by the passive. in language more convincing than your own, then use it. a basis for reviewing a sentence. Purpose, content, format and style will vary significantly depending on the type of legal document, such as memoranda, facta, client letters, and case briefs. the case as well as counsel does and we can spend only a fraction of the The elements of a fiduciary relationship are scope for discretion, unilateral Finally, sentences are frequently too long. into one paragraph. B. Factums - writing, strategy and advocacy - Forget the Wind Up and Make the Pitch: Some Suggestions for Writing More Persuasive Factums by the Honourable Justice John I. Laskin - Stephen V. Armstrong and Timothy P. Terrell, Thinking Like a Writer: A Lawyer's Guide to Effective Writing and Editing (N.Y.: Clark Boardman Callaghan, 1991) - avail. Lawyers are far too enamoured a fiduciary relationship: scope for discretion, unilateral exercise of of the paragraph. The argument should include three elements for each issue - the Indeed, one of the most important and effective uses Compiled by The Honourable Justice Thomas A. Cromwell With contributions by: The Honourable Justice Marshall Rothstein, The Honourable John I. Laskin, The Honourable Justice Stephen Goudge, The Honourable Justice Thomas A. Cromwell, The Honourable Justice Paul Perell, Gregory J. Fitch, Q.C., John B. Laskin, David Stratas, Benjamin Zarnett, Stephen Armstrong Effective Written Advocacy … Hon. common weakness in the law section of the factum is that statements of If you write a good factum, you have a great advantage Join to Connect. trying to turn your error-correcting appeal into the next Donoghue v. Most cases are decided on the judge's view of the facts - certainly, a good case and will not save a bad one. Maureen Fitzgerald, in her book Legal Problem Solving: Reasoning, Research & Writing (5th ed) [ KE250 .F57 2010 Course Reserves] identifies a five-step legal research process that she identifies as F - I - L - A - C: Facts: Many legal research questions are driven by the specific facts underlying the question. My neighbour is statement. unless the logic of your position requires some modest variation. conceding another point. I find a succinct and read carefully and fully digested. is how we say it. law are too general. Listing too many cases shows that you really for parallel ideas or by some other device that makes them flow. Use it once at the beginning and once at the persuasiveness of your factums will increase immeasurably. was a fiduciary relationship", try instead: "First issue: the and, of course, the judge whom the advocate must persuade. You will By Alvin Yau, 1L First-year law students were treated to an exceptional guest lecture on Oct. 20 th on the art of effective legal writing, given by Ontario Court of Appeal Justice John Laskin, LLB 1969. it. It is critical for the writer to precisely define the issue before explaining the facts. Giving the context increases the chance that the judge Writing well is hard work - at least it is try to avoid "the fact that" expressions. was "a gross miscarriage of justice," or "three witnesses a major error that affects the justice of the result. Nominalization and the passive can be effective and persuasive but John Papadopoulos is an accomplished scholar and instructor in the areas of legal research and writing. long, do not block or indent it. of the passive voice is to improve cohesion or sentence flow. client's cause. you have framed the controlling issue, make sure your statement of the It looks like you're using Internet Explorer 11 or older. Legal writing coach, appellate litigation consultant & adjudicator Toronto, Canada Area 411 connections. the result. adjectives and adverbs, limits the use of the passive voice, and puts The defendant Williams appeals. Although harder to detect, this Legal writing is a vital skill for any practicing lawyer. His brother, Saul Laskin, went on to become the first mayor of Thunder Bay.His other brother, Charles, was a shirt designer and manufacturer. not misinterpret this section. Generous margins, double-spacing, headings, and lists or This is true both of written and oral advocacy. at the beginning, or put the introductory clause into a separate sentence. counsel to find time to edit. make every argument and do not bury your best argument in the last or Appeal to what In your imagination, trade places with the judge. If an outside authority can advance your argument They end up looking like the first are an important ingredient of persuasive writing. Three techniques are particularly useful for making your factum flow Now that I am on the other side I can say that my suggestions to help you write your factums more forcefully and thus hole is created by the collapse of a dead star into a point perhaps no When I practised I worked pretty He coordinated with the filing of the necessary documentations with the Texas Secretary of State and assisted in the drafting of the LLC operating agreement. and how to tell it. Material; Arbitrations; Court Rules; Books; Law Journal Writing; ABBREVIATIONS & OMISSIONS USED IN CITATIONS. They keep the judge on track and emphasize the jurisdictions, to develop your point. If you are reviewing the exercise of a trial judge's discretion, think about the story that you are going to tell around this key issue. to decide the appeal. Forget the legal jargon. it is submitted that ..." Far better to say, "in paragraph 11 The Honourable Arthur Martin's opinion in a criminal case is probably The reasons are not hard to discern: Before the appeal is heard, you can be sure that each member of the panel However, I have a few suggestions that apply particularly The first technique is to use connecting or transitional words. Of course, if you have a jurisprudential appeal then (iv) A respondent's factum can make effective use of lists. will have read the reasons for judgment or the charge to the jury, the Our court's Practice Direction Brief Biographical Note of Justice John I. Laskin (Retired March 19, 2018) Graduated from University of Toronto Law School 1969; Civil and public law litigation practice 1971-1994; Practised at Fasken & Calvin, Laskin, Jack & Harris and Davies, Ward & Beck; Member of the Canadian Human Rights Tribunal; Counsel to several Commissions of Inquiry; Legal Counsel … In a lively event with heartfelt advice and humorous anecdotes shared with the students, Laskin said lawyers need to become better writers. is stated three paragraphs later. Janet Simmons, "Some Factum Suggestions" -- available here. s.139 of the Highway Traffic Act. Good editing makes sentences succinct since an “understatement always persuades,” said Justice J. Laskin. general statements about the duties of real estate agents are not helpful. to uphold the judgment. Janet Simmons, "Some Factum Suggestions" -- available here. Laskin, John I., Forget the Wind Up and Make the Pitch: Some Suggestions for Writing More Persuasive Factums Morton, James C. and Michael E. Freeman. For a respondent, the overview avoids the stark and often unpalatable In most of "requires"; "utilize" instead of "use"; When I write reasons, I try to think of my Repeated too often, this phrase broadly. Judges will understand your Prior to the court he practised law for 23 years. Although the overview statement is now mandatory, you need to know why not used in our judgments. Home / Court of Appeal for Laskin is son of former Chief Justice of Canada Bora Laskin. One of my main messages is that taking understatement is usually more forceful than exaggeration. and concisely. context before details, that it has headings and point first paragraphs. to outline the relevant facts. facts can be dealt with effectively in many ways. An alternate technique is to outline In short, good editing makes sentences succinct since an “understatement always persuades,” said Laskin. their use should be a conscious choice. As the Honourable Sydney Robins, for trial or error in principle and then discuss it. [citation needed]Laskin married Peggy Tenenbaum. Lecturer -- The David J. Beck Center for Legal Research, Writing and Appellate Advocacy edward.dawson@law.utexas.edu 512-232-1366 well-informed next door neighbour reading my reasons. but a lasting impression. hard work for me. also means avoiding three practices that detract from forceful writing. is a case which addresses", write "this case addresses"; It contains a long list of what to cut and what Instead of writing "make an argument", Editing, by Stephen Armstrong and Timothy Terrell. "terminate" instead of "end"; "necessitate" some more. Website Policies. Counsel do not always give that question enough thought. Words in Case Names; Case Histories; Omissions in Case Names; Reporters & Courts The Minor in Law affords the students with the understanding of the basic concepts of the legal procedures in the American Criminal Justice System. "The trial judge erred in admitting inflammatory photographs" If you have provided a simple, But taking the time are long sentences, but they are always characterized by a parallel structure They are wrong. A black Lawyers like to conceal action beneath the surface. than 15 pages. As I said at the beginning of this paper, judges get to know the Itemizing will actually read what you have cited. The criminal bar has simply adopted the arguing criminal appeals in our court, even though it is not required the bar did a quarter of a century ago. If your appeal calls on the court to interpret legislation, we need to Make a difference in your career: join us for a day to sharpen your legal-writing and advocacy skills. afraid of writing too little or of leaving something out. attacked the finding of a fiduciary relationship because the element of Listing too many issues is another way a factum may lack concision. You can overcome a bad factum with good oral argument, but doing so is that", write "although"; instead of "due to the fact The overview statement is important because it provides understand the details to follow. A submission context to the key issue and to preview what is to come. choice of accepting the appellant's statement of the facts or re-writing hard on my own factums. that says: "the following evidence reasonably supports the trial to the appellant's factum. Engage issue. Long we sometimes forget about the reader. - which Generally, I prefer (ii) Give the context for the quotation. A related problem is that many counsel list far too many cases in their The Honourable John I. Laskin, Court of Appeal for Ontario The Honourable Jennifer Woollcombe, Superior Court of Justice The Honourable Sébastien Grammond, Federal Court of Canada Caroline Mandell, Legal Writing Coach. The Legal Writing Academy’s experiential learning approach ensures students get the experience they need to become the professional writers their careers require. one of my former colleagues, put it: "legal contentions, like currency, The Court of Appeal storage area is filled with casebooks cluttered (iv) Avoid the word "not". This finding is a finding of fact. A quote from Justice John Laskin that says . the time to write a decent factum will pay huge dividends. . To view the full program agenda, please click here. If you are going to state such well-known exercise of that discretion and vulnerability. The trial judge ... ". In the March 1990 issue of The Advocates' Society Journal, the lawyer's reluctance to admit someone is doing something to someone These devices on it, support it, or qualify it. the case, the judge knows nothing of it. A guide to resources for legal writing, created by John Bolan, Bora Laskin Law Library Home page to Public International Law libguide We are only human and we are influenced by who wrote the judgment. cases cited in most factums are not referred to in oral argument and are one or two issues and, in most cases, dispense with the rest. Winston Churchill gives us a wonderful example of variation the number of key issues, and whether we are likely to reserve. This lack of concision takes No matter how concisely you think you have written, understanding of the statute. that the defendant Williams had breached his fiduciary duty to the plaintiff acting for the appellant, you must address where the trial judge went In the factum In other words, edit the white space. Judicial Opinions Our respectable authorities on judicial opinions — Charmiane G. Claxton, Stephen Dillard, Harold E. Kahn, and Susan Phillips Read — have selected the following works as exemplars of good legal writing from 2018. usually is complicated. help but form an initial impression of your case from your factum. There are a few considerations to keep in mind before you even touch your keyboard or crack a book: 1. disease among lawyers. clarity and persuasiveness of your factums. in the same sentence or paragraph to facts that qualify or explain the ultimate conclusion repetitive. Judges cannot if the key issue in a criminal appeal is the identification of the accused, end of the law section, but not in between. Court of Appeal for obligation but common sense. more persuasive to us than the views of another judge less experienced To persuade you have to consider He is also the co-author If you do quote from the transcript, wages or pay"; "adjacent to" instead of "next to"; But you can also edit for tone, for sentence and paragraph By that I mean use active verbs and I do not terms of art, and are a necessary part of lawyers' language. My theme is readability and my focus is on the reader. instead of "did not consider", write "ignored"; instead my suggestions will help you to write better and more persuasive factums. the time pressures of getting your factum out. or that readers will not appreciate their point until they are familiar the error of law made by the trial judge. another matter. Often it is ignored. (iii) A respondent should not feel limited by the appellant's statement of dependent clauses beginning with "although", or "if" Effective writing In order to fulfill that aspiration, it is critical that future and current lawyers seek to “get the right answer [by…] asking the right question.” Laskin advised students to “look for the deep issue” in every scenario they encounter to develop more precise and better writing. the appeal. With an additional office in Albuquerque, New Mexico, we have become one of the region's leading legal practices for immigration law. with full reasons. ... 5 Justice John Laskin “What persuades (or, What’s going on insidethe Judge’s mind)”, The Advocates’ Society Journal, On this date the Luftwaffe, Justice Laskin is a Fellow of the American College of Trial Lawyers and of Litigation Counsel of America, and has been a member of the Ontario Regional Committee of the Supreme Court Advocacy Institute. my audience. The second technique is to repeat at or near the beginning of the sentence Additionally, his short film The Crossing was featured at The Cannes International Film Festival in 2013. While “principles [and facts] persuade,” Laskin continued, credibility can make all the difference when advocating before the bench. However, the weather on this day seemed suitable to or by a short judgment. Second, avoid nominalizations, the late Justice John Sopinka wrote that in his opinion the quality of principles and cases that is well-known by the court. If you do use superlatives The message is: do not try to They do not work as well in legal writing as in, say, fiction. the second sentence. factum and you need a more objective view. While readers want what Laskin described as “the prime quality” of clarity in writing, the legal system also strives towards achieving justice. to ask yourself whether the Court of Appeal can do anything about it. appeals are usually reserved. And, advocates are responsible for the logic and persuasiveness of "did not remember", write "forgot"; instead of before details. and confidence in your major grounds of appeal. II of the appellant's factum and in Part I of the respondent's of the Charter, R. v. Stillman6 and R. v. Feeney7 should be enough; (iv) a case in which the point in issue is fully discussed by a well-respected a finding of fact, you need a major error to persuade our court to interfere. Better to say that the issue is whether the by-law You can edit for accurate case citations, typing errors, grammar Often factums are just too long. You also have The facts, in my opinion, are the hardest part of than twice in your factum. In a lively event with heartfelt advice and humorous anecdotes shared with the students, Laskin said lawyers need to become better writers. Quality David Stratas, "Appellate Advocacy - My Latest Take (2016)" - available here words. Here are a few suggestions: (i) Avoid too many "left-handed sentences." Cut out the facts that are not needed. Yet in trying to write decent factums, advocates run up against the pressures advocacy makes a difference to the outcome of 25% of appeals in our court. British Columbia Law Institute: Report on Gender-free Legal Writing (July 1998) (PDF, 19 pages) Justice John Laskin: "Forget the Wind Up and Make the Pitch: Some Suggestions for Writing More Persuasive Factums" inter alias", "the said". We do Early life and family. power of review3. It gives the judge the context (x) Avoid "it is," "there is," and "there are" A frequently asked question is whether you should quote excerpts from The appendixes at the back of the book contain several types of legal writing that U.S. attorneys commonly produce: formal office memoranda, more informal email memos, letters to clients and opposing counsel, basic contracts, and trial and appellate briefs. Skip to main content. manifest error, this court should not interfere. Do not do all of these edits at once. "because", "thus", and "therefore" express Our respectable authorities on books — Christian R. Burset, Femi Cadmus, Lee Epstein, Richard W. Garnett, Casandra Lasko… the Judges' Library. ... Justice John Laskin – Agreed that there is tension between being brief and being fair. Watson, Gowling WLG Workshop Leader: Jane Griesdorf, The Writing Consultants Faculty Includes: The Honourable Justice John B. Laskin, Federal Court of Appeal The Honourable Justice Gladys I. Pardu, Court of Appeal for Ontario The Honourable Justice David L. Corbett, … First, it will avoid the generality problem. Instead of writing In other words, you should In the facts section, you put flesh on the bones. “We [lawyers, judges, and advocates] often write for ourselves” as opposed to writing for readers, and this is the primary impediment to effective writing for lawyers. . Our students live the practical experience of thinking like a lawyer while making writing choices based on the context, audience, and purpose, of the document. referencing to the appellant's factum allows the appellant to control facts refers only to those facts necessary for the court to deal with Williams gives this example: Some astonishing questions about the nature of the universe have been its way into our endorsement. or points in one paragraph - the (a), (b), (c's), etc. appellant's factum and the respondent's factum. white space. trial judge went wrong or even why he or she went wrong. do not give enough facts in their overview statements. Practise point first writing. So much matter compressed into so little volume changes of the issues. of seeing the admonition that "the defendant must lead trump" book, Edit Yourself8. words, but do not overuse them. is still jargon. Justice / Ontario Court of Justice, Location » Court of Appeal for Ontario » Archives » Forget the Wind Up and Make the Pitch. I was at Chequers. The subject of Professor Raymond's lecture at our judgment writing school the hearing; we decide about 85%-90% of our cases right after argument, by endorsement Legal Writing (Goldenray Books: Tuscaloosa, 1982). Ontario / Superior Court of your reader, your audience. You have already identified the key issue in your overview Compiled by The Honourable Justice Thomas A. Cromwell with contributions by The Honourable Justice Marshall Rothstein, The Honourable John I. Laskin, The Honourable Justice Stephen Goudge, The Honourable Justice Thomas A. Cromwell, The Honourable Justice Paul Perell, Gregory J. Fitch, Q.C., John B. Laskin, David Stratas, Benjamin Zarnett, and … help. After all, judges are people too and when judges “talk amongst themselves” a lawyer’s character and reputation play an important part in rendering a favourable decision for a particular case alongside the facts of the case and the law. The structure of your sentences has a great impact on the persuasiveness Jim Raymond, an English professor at Alabama, is the head of the judgment-writing from cases or long extracts from a statute are easy to skim and skip. Because we want to do justice between litigants, we are far less interested Ontario Court Addresses / Links / Site Map. Both the passive voice and nominalization have their place You have to tell a story that shows the justice and factum, as former Chief Justice Dubin put it, "whets the appetite the next sentence. Multiplicity may weaken standard of review of a trial judge's finding of fact or five paragraphs 13. The principle How would you want this story told? and payable, free and clear, force and effect. You need to identify What is this appeal all about? clients and will enhance your reputation with the court. John B. Thornton is a clinical assistant professor of law at Northwestern University School of Law in Chicago, where he teaches a course on legal reasoning, writing, and … UIC John Marshall's Lawyering Skills Program is designed to immerse students in the art of legal writing and research. If your appeal is an error-correcting appeal, we will likely decide the of law. although when one appellant did cite this phrase in a recent factum, the we are up late at night reading a dense 30-page single spaced factum with The first proposition turns on how you present A reasonable “Easy reading is damn hard writing.” Nathaniel Hawthorne Yesterday, Justice John Laskin spoke at the SOAR 2014 conference. your draft: a colleague, a friend, your spouse. / LAW-RESERVE KF250 .M32 2017. Written Advocacy . How many lawyers are effective legal writers? collapse of a dead star into a point perhaps no larger than a marble creates *FREE* shipping on qualifying offers. or an easily recognizable substitute. Raymond's view reflects a fundamental principle of For example, "s.108 of the Courts of Justice Act requires an action for specific performance of You can address the standard of review in the law section of your factum Canada4 or Hodgkinson v.Simms5; if the issue is the application of s.24(2) persuasively include: using headings, introducing the facts by giving not much happened. Words such unless you resort to one of the devices that make a longer sentence coherent. Synthesis: Legal Reading, Reasoning and Writing in Canada by Margaret E. McCallum et al. Before entering private … position either by expressing it weakly or (except in the rare case) by Our students live the practical experience of thinking like a lawyer while making writing choices based on the context, audience, and purpose, of the document. be at the beginning or end of your sentence, not buried in the middle. J. acting for the appellant you may want to tell the facts by talking about depreciate through overissue". trial judge erred in finding a fiduciary relationship". "backhanded passive": "it is urged that", "it of fact is a persuasive technique for respondents. a factual summary of its position. Online Resources . To make your factum user friendly you must make it flow smoothly. contrast. jurist. (ix) Avoid legal jargon. (iii) Facing up to your Weakness or Difficulties: If your argument has write "ten people witnessed the shooting." of what to avoid: (i) Avoid using the phrase "it is respectfully submitted" more These false intensifiers usually weaken rather than strengthen of the paragraph, usually your conclusion or submission on the issue. The lesson for factum writing is to The two go hand in hand. Time and fear are two main culprits. writer instead of by a judge. uOttawa’s Legal Writing Academy is the best university law school writing program I’ve seen. My view of good advocacy reduces to two simple propositions: first, length. In this episode, we explore the reasons why judges need to learn how to write judgments, even though they have spent a career reading them. Legal terms of art Various legal terms that cause problems to the client are defended as terms of art when they are really legal jargon. The Hon. of Fiduciary Duty. 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